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Moving On...
Contributed by
WakeNsnoWboarder
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:31:38 AM in AEST
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A thousand miles per hour
Beats a heart losing power
The long descend wears on me
It's a sign of the oncoming tragedy
I feel so alive yet I can barely move
I feel like I've won but if I try I'll lose
Somethings got the best of me and needs to let go
I'm ready to get out and I want everyone to know
It's time to be me again
It's time to hang out with the friends
Nothing will hold me back
Not even your strongest attack
But a phone call from you and it all sounds the same
Tonight I'll stay home and be played by your game
Copyright ©
WakeNsnoWboarder
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2004-08-03 02:31:38]
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Re: Moving On...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:36:46 AM AEST
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Okie dokie.
good writing and luv that style.
hugs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Moving On...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:36:48 AM AEST
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Okie dokie.
good writing and luv that style.
hugs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:42:59 AM AEST
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| nice work, it all works real well |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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| nice work, it all works real well |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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| nice work, it all works real well |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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| nice work, it all works real well |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:03 AM AEST
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| nice work, it all works real well |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:43:03 AM AEST
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| nice work, it all works real well |
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Re: Moving On...
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by JoeDaddy on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:26:08 AM AEST
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| This is where I'm at right now. Thanks for the reminder! |
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Re: Moving On...
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by brew on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:28:16 AM AEST
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| You have to move on or you will never be! Good writie |
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Re: Moving On...
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:27:31 AM AEST
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Im just going to post ONCE. hehehe. Very well written poem. I like this theme. well done.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Moving On...
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 02:24:42 AM AEST
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| awsome poem!! |
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