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Feel it, Breath it, Make it, Break it, but live it
Contributed by
Row
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:23:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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To feel the soft winds of love
The summer of this emotion
Or the hurricane of hate
The winters of devotion
Love is a one way flow
Feel it and breath it
There's only one way to go
Break it and Make it
It will send you soaring
Then put your body back on the ground
Without confusion life would be boring
So take this journey found
So live this life
And take whats thrown
Cos it's just amusements
to pass the time grown
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Row
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2004-08-03 02:23:36]
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Re: Feel it, Breath it, Make it, Break it, but live it
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:31:39 AM AEST
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Very good write and so true.
Don't worry, Be happy.
very strong, wise work of art.
smiles, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Feel it, Breath it, Make it, Break it, but live it
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:38:09 AM AEST
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Oh..beautiful..very nicely done. hi friend,
just have a look at my poem "Love breeze"..
same type good job. venkat |
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Re: Feel it, Breath it, Make it, Break it, but live it
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:03:44 AM AEST
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I agree
love makes the word go round
thanks for all that fresh air....in your poem!! |
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