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But Then She Was gONE
Contributed by
anonymussme
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:09:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No one to turn to
No one to trust
She sat by herself
Her body began to rust
She got real depressed
She got really scared
Then she decided
To do what she dared
She got her moms knife
She took her dads pills
Just to make it nice
She dressed up in frills
She walked down the road
And down by the creek
Popped the pills, slit her wrists
And laid down all meek
The wind spun her hair
The moon shown on her
But all of a sudden
There was a stir
And owl made a hoot
A branch fell to the ground
And then she was gone
Relationships not bound
Down by the creek
Where the little fox lays
The girl vanished quickly
Leaving no trace of her ways
She is gone now
Notice, they don’t
The trees will not scream it
And find out, you wont
Tomorrow her dad will wake
As the sun shines at dawn
Tell her to get up
But then she was gone
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Re: But Then She Was gONE
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:14:24 AM AEST
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I got chills reading this poem. It is very good. Keep it up!
~sMiLe~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: But Then She Was gONE
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:47:26 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
very good writing!
I'm glad to hear it's an old one.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: But Then She Was gONE
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:55:35 AM AEST
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Wow..this is chillingly beautiful..but very sad..
very well written poem..Keep writing on. venkat |
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Re: But Then She Was gONE
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:42:01 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem...excellent work
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: But Then She Was gONE
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:00:24 AM AEST
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beautiful... i can relate to this poem in so many ways. I'm glad you wrote this and keep up the good work.
love always
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