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Seeing the Light
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:52:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Seeing the Light
You think you really know me
You think you want to be with me
You think too much of me
All you really see
Is what I want you to of me
You don't see reality
You only believe the lies
I tell you to believe
They'll never come to light
As you see and deny
You'll never know the true me
You don't bother to look beneath
You're afraid to get too deep
Afraid of what you'll find
In me inside
It'll never come to light
Can't go any farther
Than my skin
You'll break your heart apart
From my sins
But it'll be your fault
In the end
For never looking within
In me you'll find
How easily I can ruin your life
One day at a time
The lies over took me inside
And you'll pay the price
For never seeing the light
Your perfect little picture
I can easily shatter
Your perfect little picture
Is shattered with light
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Re: Seeing the Light
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:45:38 PM AEST
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So much power and anger in the speaker; such a threatening and well-developed presentation
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Re: Seeing the Light
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:28:30 PM AEST
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wow! powerful stuff! and very well written.
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Re: Seeing the Light
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:14:21 PM AEST
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| This is perfect..Your writing here is top notch..Perfect little picture..I loved that..With every write you post it is a new breath of air I read and feel..Good work again Jennifer. |
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