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Who I Am Today
Contributed by
rockshv
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You made me who I am today
Nothing more than useless prey
A critical mind I’m led astray
In your world of gloominess and gray
You made me suffer all this time
Hurtful words are still a crime
Cant you see me far behind?
As I stumble with eyes so blind
Don’t you know how I feel?
Too guilty to reveal?
Giving me space was not the deal
My pride was not yours to steal
Now you watch as I drown
Incapable to love, pin me down
My ugliness shows another frown
Suck it in, stay on the ground
Look at me, as I grow
Everyday is another show
What he says is one more blow
Take it all in, it’s what I know
You made me who I am today
I sit back and continuously pray
One day your coldness will decay
Forgiveness wont be a price to pay
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rockshv
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2002-10-29 23:40:00]
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Re: Who I Am Today
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 02:24:49 AM AEST
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| I feel for you...this is a sad poem but its also a great write! |
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Re: Who I Am Today
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 01:14:47 PM AEST
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I would be lying if I said I know how you feel,
how horrible of a thing to go through,i'm speachless. I could really feel your anger in this poem,good job.Christina
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