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''why''
Contributed by
shorty013
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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all these things theese thoughts these dreams are captured inside my mind.
so many that laugh others cry, little of it all makes any sense.
we look to find and seek to understand all the things we believe we deserve to know.
som things hurts, some things bleed, and more things make life hard.
the answers we desire are not always readily found, they exist in the lessons we are to learn from someone we have yet to meet.
love is never perfect and fair not always kind, but we search our lives for love and the pain that accompanies it and we have the desire for all things to be fair. learn life. live love. have strength. gain power. have wealth of all kinds.
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Re: ''why''
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by zenmind on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:40:42 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. There is a lot of insight about love and life,which shows that you have learned something through your experience, whatever it was. |
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Re: ''why''
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:07:34 PM AEST
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written well great job
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