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Voices

Contributed by kyletycz on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:22:33 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I walk through the shadows
Only to see the blackest light
My mind is a never ending fog
Accentuated by the night

These people, these voices
They give me many orders
They whisper and they scream
They cris cross borders

I scream back and try not to listen
I hear them and quickly turn arround
But they are never there
They are never to be found

I try to make them go away
I speak of them to others
But they just stare and wonder
So I must keep this secret covered

So I sit in my home, all alone
The voices keep screaming till I hear
Their ever so maddening shrieks
Untill reality is no longer clear

Are we all like this
Can this really be
Or am I forgeting
If Im really me

So I seem to forget
When no one is here
That I still talk to people
Who's silhouets are ever so clear

My mind keeps degrating
People try to bring me aid
But people don't seem to realize
All I get from them is pain

The voices give me clues
The voices show me a solution
They help me rid my life
Of every type of pollution

I walk to the closet
Where I have kept my gun
No need for someone to hide
No need for someone to run

I dont need to take this
I've had enough
These voices made me insane
These voices are too much

Im loading my revolver
One bullet at a time
Five for the voices
But the first one is mine

I open my mouth and close my eyes
I am ready for this heavenly surprise

The barrel oh so cold
My mind has lost realitys hold

I hope the voices are sent to hell
Those voices that made me unwell

I worry not though
To heaven I shall go

I squeeze oh so tight
These voices I shall smite
Suddenly its all goes white
Finnally, I shall be allright




Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-08-02 18:22:33]
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Re: Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Cursed_Witch on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:32:58 PM AEST
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gooood write, i love it :) alot of us share the same ideas... keep it up


Re: Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:39:48 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to the voices part. You just have to be stronger than them. This was a very well written poem. I liked it a lot.

Katie


Re: Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by badboyzlover on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:08:03 PM AEST
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This is a really great write. Good work. Keep it up!


Re: Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Terry on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:12:09 PM AEST
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That poem, to me, is scary as it shows the reality of suicide and the false belief that they will go to Heaven afterwards. The vivid detail is really good.




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