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PORCELAIN
Contributed by
Alina
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:28:29 PM in AEST
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Walking down the street
Everyone always smiles
Life seems so perfect and neat
With everyones PORCELAIN face
Everyone lives behind their PORCELAIN faces
Lives behind their mask
Lives behind their make-up
Lives behind staind glass
But some live with a broken mask
And others with no PORCELAIN face
Those are the ones they want to hide
Because the truth is shown upon their face
And for some , things may be -ok-
But for others it's just not so
So look at your PORCELAIN face
And see how much it shows.
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-08-02 16:28:29]
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Re: PORCELAIN
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:35:37 PM AEST
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Great advice, and written beautifully.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: PORCELAIN
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:15:52 PM AEST
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I can totally relate. The way you told this story was amazing. I agree with the above, good advice!
Katie |
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Re: PORCELAIN
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by kyletycz on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:33:15 PM AEST
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| nice write, i liked your message alot, i think there are too many people going trough life and interchanging their masks as they see fit for the people and situation, changing the side they show people minute to minute..... |
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Re: PORCELAIN
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by MomentInTime on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:47:52 PM AEST
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Yes, it's a shame that some would want to hide behind masks - there's probably a good reason for it.
Well written
Jordan
PS. at one point I started a poem along the same lines, yet did not go beyond the first verse:
This hide and seek game which you play
removes not what's apparent:
invisible though you think you are,
to me you are transparent.
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Re: PORCELAIN
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:00:05 PM AEST
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wow good peom u must live close to me,its exactly like that here,and i live in a small town but theres alot of stories and lies that go around,its like a movie and we're all acting,just because we don't like our lifes,great advice keep up the good work,take a look at my writes,even though they're not like this u might like them
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