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crimson blood
Contributed by
kammie
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My crimson blood flows away,
As lightening litters the sky,
It sketches out demons claws,
The bottom of my soul shatters,
Hot blood courses though and out,
Lanterns cast shadows of life,
Kissed by waves of red,
Clouds wave farewell,
Rumbling thunder approaches,
Wariors cast prayers of below,
Angels sing poems of above,
Dizzyness seeps through the body,
Limpness takes a hold over me,
The body I once possesed,
My life from birth to death flashes,
My body elevates as I watch,
Evil takes a grip and in sink its claws,
Whats left of my soul screams out,
The last drop of crimson flows away,
I watch my body fall into limbo,
On the physical plane, I am gone,
My soul floats up,
My mind down,
Only my crimson blood remains...
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Re: crimson blood
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:25:39 PM AEST
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becky this is gorgous
its what i feel right now
and u've expressed it better than i could ever word feel or think
hats off to you
im not worthy of reading your poems their just brill!
luv ya lots hun xx
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Re: crimson blood
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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This is a truly amazing write....great job
Lots of Love
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Re: crimson blood
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:04:57 PM AEST
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This is a great poem...i can relate to this very well....im glad that you enjoy my poetry and im glad that its helped you...that means alot to me to know that my poetry means something to ppl.....so thank you very much....and again this is a great poem
Lots of Love
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