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who i am.
Contributed by
apollo
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sliding down this silky waterfall
slither, tither.
Visuals, more than ever.
catch them, frame them.
See this butterfly
touch it, feel it,
give it your love.
be humiliated.
be shattered.
be yourself.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2004-08-02 13:37:35]
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Re: who i am.
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:40:08 PM AEST
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its really beautiful
i can imagine the delicate wings of the butterfly
and the waterfall so calm and relaxing
it seems so warm
but to find out that it was also sad made it full with emotions...well done
luv han xx |
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Re: who i am.
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by KynaIsisPoetess on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:43:11 PM AEST
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| nicely written! good flow and context! |
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Re: who i am.
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:44:13 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem, very descriptive, and you say all you need to. well done
Kimberly :) |
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Re: who i am.
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:52:56 PM AEST
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you have written so well and true of the feeling of one sided love, so sad... hugs n' love nessa
@->.->:- |
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Re: who i am.
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by loopylou on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:56:44 PM AEST
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| wow this is short but it says all that is important. well done. ive felt like this and you captured the feeling exactly!.i dont know what type of poetry id class this as i see negative and postive things from this poem.it really got me thinking. loved it! thanks! |
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Re: who i am.
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by arden on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:10:05 PM AEST
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i can relate to this.
i simply love how its written, its so beautiful and amazing and still holds saddness and emotion. i loved this poem.
greatly written. keep it up.
5 stars
Arden |
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