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mourning
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:20:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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im mourning for you
the love we had
the whispers and soft kisses
and the warmth i felt as you touched me
not just on the outside but on the inside too
i believed in you
as i still do
i'll give up everything to find you
i'll let the darkness take over me
just to see you
as i lay beside your grave
and my tears wet the soil
the fresh burried earth
the white flowers beside me
the maggots
i imagine feeding on your flesh
and i smile
you will become what you always wanted
a part of the world
the soft earth,the air we breathe,the water we drink
but i cant help thinking
of life without you
facing things on my own
without someone to hold my hand
and i close my eyes
and i mourn
i cry
and my heart splits
and inside im dying
the blood rushes from my lips
and i lay
crushed inside and out
the flowers weep for me and you
and cry a frozen tear
and as i cry the last tear
you hand holds mine
and i smile
as i mourn no more
i love...
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Re: mourning
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:28:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. and Beautifully written. You have potential.
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Re: mourning
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:39:03 PM AEST
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Sadly beautiful!!!!
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Re: mourning
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by Kie on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST
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This touched me on so many levels.
My heart goes out to you.
Kie |
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Re: mourning
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:47:40 PM AEST
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awwww...... this is so beautifully heartfelt, i identify deeply with the feelings, and am moved to tears myself..... hugs n' love nessa
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