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Disunite
Contributed by
ExoticDreamer
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Disunite
Dance lightly on the shadow
of the woman that was me.
Knowing now you found it right
to throw away the key.
Caress my soul in wanting
from the terrors felt at night.
Knowing there would be no way
to hide my horrid flight.
Ease my aching body
from the broken pain of fist.
Pounding so relentlessly
through virtue's viral mist.
Dry tears of my calling
when the cattle prods my heart.
Know I gave you all I had
of me right from the start.
Bandage broken branches
where they fought to hold you tight.
Grasping at those wasted straws
that would never make us right.
Release me from this bondage
that hampers my heart's life.
Take away the simple words
that made me your wife.
Copyright ©
ExoticDreamer
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2004-08-02 12:51:43]
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Re: Disunite
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by KynaIsisPoetess on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:18:11 PM AEST
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| very good read! |
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Re: Disunite
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:18:46 PM AEST
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| I like this , well done. |
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Re: Disunite
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:34:35 PM AEST
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Wow.... A very powerful poem. Each verse is original and flows perfectly. awesome poem.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Disunite
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:17:23 AM AEST
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So much sadness in this verse. Endings can be heartwrenching and you have captured the pain and sorrow with brilliance.
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