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Hazy Eyes
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Does she even know me?, do i even know myself. do i even know her? does she even know herself. im really beginning to doubt myself this time. do we even know who the hell we are? this ***** is starting to fly over my head, and you seem to be pulling in this ********* every hour. am i really happy with who im becoming?, now ask yourself are you really happy with the person that you are, or did you ***** up too much, let your life pass you bye. do you even know if your happy or sad?, because sometimes i wonder if im sad or happy. take another hit of this smoke filled glass, to make it all pass.
Its alright just let it go, its gonna be ok. just close your eyes and dont think about anything at all. drift away into paradise where the skys are always blue and the sun is always bright.
Am i ready for this question, i really hope that i can get it through my toungue. will, will you please go out with me. will, will you please watch the sun set through my eyes. hazy sky breaks to a brighter day, my hazy eyes are starting to clear, im starting to lift up from all this ***** pain that i have caused myself and its all because of you.
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Re: Hazy Eyes
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by BlazeingHeart on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:56:37 PM AEST
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i really like this poem it is like ou read what is happening in my life but it is a good write
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Re: Hazy Eyes
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:40:12 PM AEST
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Dramatic,....I liked it. She better now!!!!! this is a well written plea. good job
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Hazy Eyes
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by Alina on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:23:33 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem. All of us wonder this sometimes, about who we really are. Some of us never find out. |
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