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The End
Contributed by
kurt17cobain
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:37:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Once its the end you cant turn back
Only with memories you can stack
the love you had for me inside
and put behind a cold heart to hide
the feelings toward you
I the broken pieces you the glue
to mend this aching heart
For it wishes we never had to part
to begin with, what went wrong?
I felt our love solid and strong
enough to get throuhg any task
Apparently you took of the mask
that made me blind to your true feeling
Now I must start the healing
Copyright ©
kurt17cobain
... [
2004-08-02 09:37:36]
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Re: The End
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:24:27 PM AEST
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| Well done, nicely written. |
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Re: The End
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:48:07 PM AEST
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yeah, this is the hardest part, starting the healing.
Good write,
you expressed your feelings brillisntly. Great write, Phil xxx |
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Re: The End
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:59:18 PM AEST
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Brilliantly written..sad tho.. Hope you get over it soon....
Jenni |
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Re: The End
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:10:41 AM AEST
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| Awsomely written...You have a way with words. I feel your pain through the words that you have written. Good job. God Bless. |
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