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Guilty Conscience
Contributed by
rockshv
on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My guilty conscience is awake
Lives of others are too much at stake
I can’t believe I brought all this pain
End my life; slice it through the vein
Why do I keep running on this course?
When will I ever learn to put God first?
Take away all that means so much
Strip me down; I can’t bare your touch
An endless fight with my heart
I can’t take this anymore, pull me apart
Everything on a roller coaster spinning fast
Any love left, is useless and wont last
My emptiness rises above, screams a desperate cry
There goes my soul-waving goodbye
For now I continue to take my last breath
I must accept existence will die a slow death
Copyright ©
rockshv
... [
2002-10-29 01:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Guilty Conscience
(User Rating: 1 ) by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:34:03 AM AEST (User
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I thought this write was very creative and well written. It showed a lot of painful emotion which is something we share in our poetry-style. I would also like to say thank you for your kind words on my poem. Take care.
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