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like cold summer rain
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:24:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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a slight northern wind
will carry you to me
and your eyes are the pearls
of melloncholy
so the signs do tell
that we bleed the same blood
we feel the same flood
that we dread the same hell
because you are my third eye
my velvet night sky
and i can feel your pain
like the cold summer rain
and i can feel your pain
like the cold summer rain
you have become a part of me
the only part that i like
you bring out the honesty
ive yearned for, for so long
so dont rap our heart
in the roses you find
because i cant promise
the thorns wont sink in with time
because your are my bridge
you are my ledge
and i can feel your pain,
like cold summer rain
i can feel your pain,
like cold summer rain
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Re: like cold summer rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:11:45 PM AEST
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I really loved this whole poem, it was very unique. My favorite part was:
so dont rap our heart
in the roses you find
because i cant promise
the thorns wont sink in with time
It's a wonderful poem.
Katie
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Re: like cold summer rain
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:04:00 PM AEST
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| i thought that maybe you could make it sound better its alredy excelent but maybe u coul dchange feel the same flood to drowing in our own blood or flood of tears sorry i,m very anoying lol but just trying to help xgripx |
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