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What is Love?
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:40:10 AM in AEST
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When we kissed
It set off something in my head
This feeling came over me
I felt weak in the knees
For days i layed there sleeping
But not sleeping
Thinking about that kiss
And what it meant
But
What did it mean?
Did it mean we were a couple?
Or that we were becoming closer?
To this day i still do not know
Was it love i felt?
If it was
We would still be together
But sadly we are not
So that couldn't be it
Then what was it
I think i've found out
Its just a spell
It was cast over me
Blinding me from what was real
When the blinders came off
I saw you for what you were
Not a great person as I thought
You wonder why i left
I couldn't take the abuse
The lieing
The cheating
Now that it is done
I'm less of a man
I ran from my problems
I did not confront them
And for that i'm sorry
I will now
Say my final goodbyes
I know you do not care
But its okay
Don't feel sadness for me
You have a child to take care of
I tried to play the role of a father
But you wouldn't have it
Let him know this was not his fault
It was not yours
This is mine
Which is why i must pay the price
Goodbye to you and him
Goodbye for ever
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Re: What is Love?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:45:48 AM AEST
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Nice job done on this write, it is also a reality check as many a child has to grow up without a father, but at least you were honest enough, thats something.
Although maybe you should at least still write to your son, but hey who am I, but another reader to be giving you advice, I have no children of my own and never will be able to, so I havent been in your position.
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Re: What is Love?
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:55:37 AM AEST
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| just to clear it up....it was not my kid.....i only tried to raise him as my own |
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Re: What is Love?
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:57:31 AM AEST
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Wwow, sadd but a very powerfull write.
Was the son yours?
Either way the child needs u.
Hang in there 'cause joy cometh in the morning.
sorry hear u feeling bad but we need your help writing.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy
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Re: What is Love?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:24:53 AM AEST
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a very sad emotional write it has lots of powerful stuff going on in this one...a beautiful write and its nice to know you arent giving up on your own flesh and blood but sad to hear you cared...enough to take him and her in and yet she give it all up...you know what Im saying??? well however I like the write...keep it up ok...
much love, your good friend,
Dani |
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Re: What is Love?
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by Kevin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:07:39 AM AEST
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| Excellent Poem, It really gets you thinking about fatherless children. Excellent read, I really enjoyed it. |
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