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Just A Dream
Contributed by
asatru
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:14:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The rain is pouring
Outside
And the stars are glowing
At night
The sun is sleeping
In the eastern
The moon is radiating
In a cloudless night
The wind is blowing
In the warm summer dark
The leaves dance
As the trees wave
The roads blacken
As the cars lose traction
The houses burn
And the trees flourish
The people fall dead
And the pets run free
The roads disappear
As grass grows there
The dams evaporate
While the rivers rush forward
The fences collapse
And the horses are all running wild
The cars explode
And the o-zone rebiulds itself
The dresses fall apart
As the cotton fields replenish themselves
It's just too bad
That this was all just a dream...
Copyright ©
asatru
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2004-08-02 02:14:41]
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Re: Just A Dream
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:29:35 AM AEST
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vivid and captivating, a lovely dream...... love how you wrote this poem; and you killed us all off quite nicely! lol, thanx for waking up, writing it out, and sharing, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Just A Dream
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:37:24 PM AEST
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Wow what a dream is an understatement of the whole thing!
Self-destructing is what I call it! Hope you don't have nightmares like this very often!
Great Poem..........very catching for your reader
and I enjoyed it to the end!
Poetic hugs
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