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Edge of the storm
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:20:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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An old wind whispers
outside my window…
where I sat and dreamed
of a sweeter tomorrow.
‘Follow me’ it echoes,
all through the dusk
and all through the night,
‘Follow me to the calm,
come with me over the
edge of the storm’.
Too long I have pretended
that I didn’t hear it…
too long I have been afraid
of an unknown tomorrow.
But now it’s time to listen
to what I have only heard before,
to believe in what I have found.
I’ll let my faith lead me home
through the valley, and over the
edge of the storm.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-08-02 01:20:59]
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:30:11 AM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:31:26 AM AEST
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| I recieved a sense of calm from this poem. It is a fantastic piece. Good work. |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:39:29 AM AEST
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Ah, I sense an awakening to life's truths? This is a great revelation to the birth of reality. Great piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:40:04 AM AEST
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this is exquisite, i always look forward to your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by venkat on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:10:50 AM AEST
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..and I am to agree with all those comments.
best of luck. venkat |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:39:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful! Your poetry has a way of warming my heart. This is what it's all about. Taking the plunge into a new life. Letting ourselves be caught up in a story much mightier than our own. Such is being a Warrior of the Light.
Blessings
Andrew |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by Trippychick on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:03:38 AM AEST
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This one I like too.
Too long I have pretended
that I didn’t hear it…
too long I have been afraid
of an unknown tomorrow.
But now it’s time to listen
to what I have only heard before,
It's so wonderful to think of other people spreading their wings and following new paths. That's what life is all about.
Good write
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:54:40 AM AEST
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Some tiptoe as others leap. Some hear whispers while others hear shouting. It is so incredibly moving and quite extraordinary when a person comes to understand the voice they hear (loud or soft) and begins to listen to it (moving slowing or not so slowly in some new direction).
This is a wonderful piece... stuffed full of timidness and passion at the same time. I find it remarkable that you've captured it so eloqently... so... perfectly. Very well done!
Tiptoeing along to my own inner voice,
SNM |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:44:00 PM AEST
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Very much like a Warrior of Light. Brought that to my mind too. Simply beautiful.
Take care
David |
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Re: Edge of the storm
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by avanottingham on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:21:54 AM AEST
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This has been a pleasure to read! One of my absolutely favorites on this site!
~Ava |
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