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Rain
Contributed by
Stew
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The clouds move slowly in
They stop and rain pours from within
It goes to the valleys, mountains, and towns
It pours down with beautiful sounds
And just as fast it came...
The wind carries it away.
Copyright ©
Stew
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2004-08-01 23:14:09]
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Re: Rain
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:20:20 PM AEST
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Another good write here. All three of them are written well.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Rain
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:34:56 PM AEST
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| This poem is very simple and light hearted. It cleans the pallet after reading many dark and heavy poems. I enjoyed it. I think I will want to see what else you have to offer. Keep writing and posting. |
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Re: Rain
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by MomentInTime on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:00:33 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed the imagery :o) |
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Re: Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:12:32 AM AEST
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beautiful.......... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Rain
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by tifrob on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:34:27 AM AEST
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It was very good. Very discriptive and flowed well.
J~ |
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