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I can't
Contributed by
pyro_88
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:33:34 PM in AEST
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I can't stand it anymore.
You call me names,
And say I’m useless.
You leave me with bruises and scars'
And you still want my love.
I can't take this ***** anymore.
Your killing me inside.
I feel like nothing.
I'm a nobody in a crowd of people.
No one knows me,
And I fear no one ever will.
I can't live my life this way anymore.
I can't take this ridicule from you any longer.
This is my last warning to you.
To stop this before I take my life.
I can't live with this anymore.
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pyro_88
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2004-08-01 22:33:34]
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Re: I can't
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:41:16 PM AEST
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| how terrible to feel or write that way. get happy. whatever is causing this, get rid of it, her or him. write fun or love poems, make yourself feel good. |
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Re: I can't
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:48:44 PM AEST
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| I do not know your exact situation but I can sypmatize. I have felt similar feelings. They are terrible and sometimes I still feel that way. Wonderful poem. Extremely well written. |
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Re: I can't
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:57:46 AM AEST
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There isnt a topic for pain hate hurt and continous betrayal.
I know what you go through my sister went through the same thing, until we found out, and yet it is strange she didnt talk to me again for years because I interferred and done unto him what he did to my sister everynight....Never did work that out....maybe I should've just butted out.
Lose the problem go find you someone that loves you, and I do mean love, no one should be someones elses boxing bag.
I know I am probaly way off track as to what this poem portrays, so if I am I apoligise and wil zip my lips. |
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Re: I can't
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by answers on
Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 01:12:01 PM AEST
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| very meaningfull, dont stop writing |
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