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Prince of darkness
Contributed by
gothik_twitch
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:22:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I sit here inside, watching you disappear into the night
I feel like im dying without you
Come back to me once more my prince of darkness
You satisfy me and my needs
Touch me with your pale icy hands
And kiss me with your sharp toungue.
Your black hair and cold red eyes enchant my darkest of feelings
The fog is settling behind you and you disappear all together
You told me you couldn't kill me
you respected my mortality.
So you're off to find new prey to feast on
Well let me tell you something my darling,
Feast on me, make me yours of immortality.
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Re: Prince of darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bruce on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:38:08 PM AEST (User
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very well written, but he is all yours |
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Re: Prince of darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by WestCPunk on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:00:15 AM AEST (User
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cool i like this lol at the end it sorta sounds like a vampire thing but thats just me nice job
Much love
Shelbi
LoL i don't think any of us want our poems copied |
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Re: Prince of darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:52:18 AM AEST (User
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Flowing darkness resides in every word of this poem, swesome read, yet I have never copied any others work for I have no need or desire to do so.
So your work is yours to keep for eternity. |
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Re: Prince of darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:00:43 AM AEST (User
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Very interesting. Don't worry I won't take it. I have plenty of my own. Keep up the good work.
Blu |
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