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Iridescence
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:16:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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spiraling out of your mind
into the iridescence;
inhaling nothing
but breathing in the scent
of restlessness
of lights in the distance
of a spreading warmth
that spills over your lips...
numbing, yet comforting
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2004-08-01 22:16:52]
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Re: Iridescence
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:03:11 AM AEST
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| Interesting. this is a thinking poem. |
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Re: Iridescence
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:05:34 PM AEST
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| very nice. |
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Re: Iridescence
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:50:20 PM AEST
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| This poem was somewhat different but I really liked it. I'm not sure if I know what it means but great write anyway. |
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Re: Iridescence
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:50:35 AM AEST
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Bravo! Very different and interesting. It gave me something to think about all day. Keep writing you are truely talented.
Blu |
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Re: Iridescence
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by fayeelizibeth on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:05:06 PM AEST
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| how simple and yet, very thought-provoking. i really like the last line, very soothing in an almost haunted way. quite nice. |
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