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Simplistic Suicide
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:00:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Simplistic Suicide
Life sucks and all that it implies
The nothingness in it is pointless
Only pain and disappointment
And that's nothing to live for
Not anymore
My simplistic suicide
Is all I want in life
The cuts come alive
The scars never die
They live inside
Where the pain resides
With the loneliness
That I try to hide
Your reaction will be careless
When you find out
I cared too much to live this life
This is the only way out
From this pointless life
Nothing's holding me back
From leaving this time
My simplistic suicide
I remember the nights I cried
Because of the pain inside
I released it with a knife
Hating everything in life
Only wanting to die
Nothing's holding me back this time
What lies behind this decision
Is my simplistic suicide
All I ever wanted in life
It's so easy to die
And so hard to live
I gave up to die
For my simplistic suicide
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Re: Simplistic Suicide
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by WestCPunk on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:08:09 PM AEST
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wow this was really well writen and full of so much pain and emotion i'm sure you've read some of my stuff and know that i know exactly how it feels. Full of so much anger hate sadness and everything. together maybe we'll be able to pull through this because we haven't seen nothing yet!
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Re: Simplistic Suicide
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:42:47 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem...i can relate to this so well.....i know how badly it hurts and how much pain life delivers....but stay strong and try to fight through it....feel free to PM me anytime
Lots of Love
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Re: Simplistic Suicide
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by Stew on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:28:40 PM AEST
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hey, i love your poem, but it is so full of hate and pain. i try to be optimistic about life. i know it is hard because i have tried many times to kill myself, but it is no way out. i hope you write me so we can maybe talk about it.
Love forever
Stew |
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Re: Simplistic Suicide
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by Dopetherapy on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:37:24 PM AEST
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| You seem to capture all my feelings into this one poem. I really love this poem and its very inspiring. thank you for the comment on mine. Take care x_X |
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Re: Simplistic Suicide
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:17:49 PM AEST
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beautifull poem
sadly i couldnt really feel the hate, anger and endless pain because i feel numb right now, i just cant shake this feeling of numbness, but when i get out of it, i promis you ill comeback and reread it.
good luck in the long run.
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