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The Perfect Map
Contributed by
morelikelyrics
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The Perfect Map...
Would lead me to your heart
And I'd keep it in my golve compartment
Until I've found my way
For if we were to ever part
I'd unfold my map,
And decide which wrong turn I've made
But until I reach my destination
Or find the perfect map...
I can only dream of a time when we're near
And the day I'll unfold my map,
To find that "You Are Here"
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morelikelyrics
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2004-08-01 20:30:45]
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Re: The Perfect Map
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:33:10 PM AEST
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| Cute poem!! i really liked the " you are here" part!! im looking at my map right now on my road in life!! Great job! |
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Re: The Perfect Map
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by Solnubis on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:03:37 PM AEST
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| Very deep! Short and to the point. |
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Re: The Perfect Map
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:31:16 PM AEST
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Good solid plan, my friend. I like it! You need spellcheck.
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Re: The Perfect Map
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by arden on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:12:54 PM AEST
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aww this was really cute and romantic.
really good. i liked it alot :)
5 stars
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Re: The Perfect Map
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:24:55 AM AEST
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I loved this one.
Not a word wasted, a 'perfect poem' about the 'perfect map'. :) |
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