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Just A Man
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:34:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just A Man
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I am just a man
A hero to none
A simple man
A father to one
No armor of steel
No spider web
No heavenly halo
Around my head
No professor of knowledge
No rocket scientist
Just a humble man
Trying his best
I’m just a sinner
Saved by grace
I’m just a participant
In the rat race
I have no want
To be any higher
To be happy in life
Is my desire
I’m just a man
A hero to none
Just a simple man
A father to one
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2004-08-01 19:34:47]
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Re: Just A Man
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by Heartfilledblood on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:50:15 PM AEST
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This is so good! I loved it. You are a hero man. Im sure no doubt you son thinks you are the greatest thing. Great write! I hope to read lots more!
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Re: Just A Man
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:06:01 PM AEST
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| My father is still my greatest hero and always will be. He has been gone for over 20 years but will never be less in my eyes. Loving, nurturing, guiding fathers are always heros in their childrens lives and their actions help their children know how to mature into a good person and a loving parent. You are a hero and the type we need many more or in this world today. |
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Re: Just A Man
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:06:28 PM AEST
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| My father is still my greatest hero and always will be. He has been gone for over 20 years but will never be less in my eyes. Loving, nurturing, guiding fathers are always heros in their childrens lives and their actions help their children know how to mature into a good person and a loving parent. You are a hero and the type we need many more of in this world today. |
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Re: Just A Man
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:26:37 PM AEST
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this is really good. the flow is amazing, and just the way u wrote it. wow! great job. keep up the good work.
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Re: Just A Man
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:01:36 AM AEST
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this is gorgeous, keep 'em comin jeff:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Just A Man
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:17:46 AM AEST
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So honest.
I love the way this is written, with such simplicity and humility.
Depth, character and sweetness all shine through.
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Re: Just A Man
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:42:36 PM AEST
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U may jus be a ssimple man but u r a great poet.
good write.
bring a father is abig job even if u only have one.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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