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When i'm not
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i know its not fare
what do i have to show
i really care
i guess i'll just have to go
its hard to sleep at night
all i hear is all the fights
that go on in my head
all alone in this bed
when i'm dead and gone
i know i'll never be alone
i've got you on the phone
for now i'm just gonna enjoy life
staring at this knife,i wanna
refrain myself from thinking of what
i should do with this knife,all ***** off
15 years gone by
i wanna die
sick of all these lies
when i'm dead and gone
i know i'll never be alone
i've got you on the phone
tell me what to do
you know whats best
and only you
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2004-08-01 18:51:48]
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Re: When i'm not
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by Heartfilledblood on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:08:14 PM AEST
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Im sorry you feel this way. If you stay strong things will get better. You have to make things get better though for yourself. You cant wait for something to happen. Make something happen.
Good write.
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Re: When i'm not
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:24:00 PM AEST
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| Very good write. It's ashamed that so many people have to go through something like that. But only they can make life better. Hope you can see the sun through the storm. |
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Re: When i'm not
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:29:57 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
One can feel your pain in this write.
sounds like u don't have a very good home life for some reason.
Kepp writing as it's healing before u know u will feel like writing something positive.
If u need a friend, emystar@msn.com
Luv, huggs, pryaers,
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Re: When i'm not
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:36:54 PM AEST
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sorry about the title guys its actually called "when i'm dead",thanx 4 the comments
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