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Icicle
Contributed by
LittleWillow
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:48:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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a pointed crystalized raindrop
hangs from the roof
what a strong, frozen will
it stays perfectly clear
the icicle begins to cry
its tears slide smoothly down its body
and freeze to its jagged tip in the bitter cold
the icicle grows larger with each session of crying
what a miracle of natural beauty it is
it should not be taken for granted
isn't it a true spectacle of magnificence when tiny droplets of water freeze to form beautiful, individual ice sculptures
that hang from our roofs?
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2004-08-01 13:48:38]
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Re: Icicle
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:56:54 PM AEST
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Awwww this is awesome....great imagery!!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Icicle
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by Lost_Shadow on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 02:34:50 PM AEST
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| I enjoy how you have depicted my most favourite season. I find Winter a beauty in itself. |
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Re: Icicle
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:33:05 PM AEST
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oh yes! and this poem is fabulous:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Icicle
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:26:39 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful! Winter is not my favorite season, but it does offer up some lovely scenes. Long hanging icicles is a site to see. Thanks for sharing! Much peace. |
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