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Letting The Pain Slip
Contributed by
PieceOfABrokenSoul
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:23:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the knife starts to slip,
The blood continues to drip.
As I sit there staring at the crimson floor,
I’m wishing for you to knock at the door.
Come in and sit,
Try to help me with my fit.
Of course, I know you’ll never show,
And that’s why I cried only minutes ago.
Every night I feel this pain,
Again wishing this was a game.
Everyday I attempt to look past,
To a world much more vast.
Life’s fluid out on the floor,
Forget knocking at the door.
I won’t answer because my mind is in a dip,
As I continue letting the pain slip.
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PieceOfABrokenSoul
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2004-08-01 09:23:55]
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Re: Letting The Pain Slip
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:32:23 AM AEST
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| this is exactly what i feel, every night, and you've done so well to put it into words - i've tried many times but never succeeded. im sorry for your pain, it will take time but we just have to hope it will start to slip away slowly. katie xxx |
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Re: Letting The Pain Slip
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by Dan666 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 03:36:34 PM AEST
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| very touching poem you must really miss jackie take care |
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Re: Letting The Pain Slip
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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i can relate to this very much...you expressed it so well....its a great poem...good job
Lots of love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Letting The Pain Slip
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by unexplainablesilence52 on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 12:04:42 PM AEST
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| I love it. It explains what i am going through so much |
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