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Nirvana destination
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:47:09 AM in AEST
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Painful tears are falling,
The ones you caused yourself,
The hurt I feel and the blood I bleed,
Can’t be good for my health,
So save me now oh father,
Bring me to my grave,
I’ve lived my life and done the miles,
And tired to be strong and brave,
Nirvana is the destination,
There I can be free,
I’ll end the pain, now here I come,
Then together you and me,
I try not to be a coward,
But I’ve suffered to be strong,
A broken blade would bring me peace,
Now that nothing I do could be wrong,
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Re: Nirvana destination
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by Row on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:57:01 AM AEST
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ah... so this is wat a good poem looks like
lol, great work loz |
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Re: Nirvana destination
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:02:00 AM AEST
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woah this poem blew me away, it sounded so much like a song or ballad, it was dam good.
awesome imagery, and it rippled with sadness, excellent write. |
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