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•*~•~*• MAYBE YOU*RE NOT THE ONE •*~•~*•
Contributed by
ChinaRivera
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:08:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Maybe you*re not the one for me,
if you*re intimidated by what
you see. Maybe we*re just not
meant to be, if you cant see
whats inside of me. Maybe you*re
not my lovers stride, if you*re
filled with so much egotism and
pride. Maybe this isn*t lovers
lane, if the words from your
mouth bring nothing but pain.
Maybe we shouldn*t be together,
if you think you can say or do
whatever. Maybe this relationship
will never work out, if im in the
realm of so much doubt. May i can*t
look forward to good days, if you*re
unwilling to change bad ways,
and if you refuse to acknowledge
the wrongs you*ve done. Then Maybe
You*re Not The One.
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Copyrights © 2004 By China Rivera
May God Bless All. Peace & Love.
Copyright ©
ChinaRivera
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2004-08-01 05:08:31]
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Re: •*~•~*• MAYBE YOU*RE NOT THE ONE •*~•~*•
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:57:13 AM AEST
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The true path of love is never an easy one to find.
I hope you find yours
steve |
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Re: •*~•~*• MAYBE YOU*RE NOT THE ONE •*~•~*•
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by brew on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:44:45 AM AEST
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| Sad and deep write........Flowed nicely! |
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Re: •*~•~*• MAYBE YOU*RE NOT THE ONE •*~•~*•
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by dedosser on
Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 11:12:48 PM AEST
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| first line scratches the surface and it never gets any deeper than that. there's no development throughout. stanzas are interchangeable but at least it makes sense |
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