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Not Just In My Dream
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:19:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Each day of my life I am dreaming
my dreams are always of you
I see your beautiful face
I watch everything you do
Every single movement
your smile or just combing your hair
How gorgeous you look
in all the things you wear
God's gift to the world
the most perfect women there is
Every man on the universe
wishes he could say you were his
But you are mine my darling
and Not Just In My Dream
In my life and in my heart
you remain supreme
I love you sweetheart
of this you can be sure
Throuhout our lives together
this love will always endure
Copyright ©
Bruce
... [
2004-08-01 00:19:25]
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Re: Not Just In My Dream
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:24:52 AM AEST
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Simple and charming
well done |
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Re: Not Just In My Dream
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by priss on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:54:34 AM AEST
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| sweet!! lucky girl |
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Re: Not Just In My Dream
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by Thivanka on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:02:00 AM AEST
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Nice poem, liked it.
-Thivanka |
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Re: Not Just In My Dream
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by pixie on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:07:15 AM AEST
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yes this is very charming and a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Not Just In My Dream
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by Stew on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:52:36 PM AEST
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| Bruce, it's stew. do you mind me asking who this lucky girl is? if not, then just send me back a message. she sounds wonderful! |
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