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The death of me
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:52:05 PM in AEST
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His skin felt like sand paper against my face,
his lips on mine felt like a sin a sin i coulsnt stop from happening,
his voice played the same song in back of my head...
his body twice as heavy as mi ne rubbing against my battered soul...
the physical abuse was enough...or so i thought...
his eyes haunted my dreams
his touch took my sanity
"between"the sheets was where he said hed protect me...
nothing stopped him,
not my trears
not my screams
not my pleading nor his knoledge of ***** his own blood
instead he covered my mouth
slapped me across the face n told me "id get used to it....that id like it"
i tried to fight this ogre on toip of me
i tried telling him to stop
the pain was too much
the complains became echoes in back of my head as i blacked out
suddenly i stopped pushing ans kicking...
and soon i put my hands on my face and tried to hide the shame...
i closed my eyes and went to my daddy...
and forgot about the man that took my sanity...
and caused me my death....
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Re: The death of me
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:14:06 PM AEST
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| interesting and emotional. |
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Re: The death of me
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by priss on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:26:10 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem, but extremely hard to read, because i can relate. i'm sorry this happened to you. |
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Re: The death of me
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:37:26 PM AEST
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Im soo sry this happened to you...but this is a great write
Lots of Love
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Re: The death of me
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:13:02 PM AEST
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| WHY DO THEY KILL US SO? WHAT CAN THEY BE THINKING OF? MY FATHER KILLED ME TOO.- I AM SO SORRY- I FEEL YOUR PAIN-..........ISNT IT STRANGE? |
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