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break me
Contributed by
priss
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:51:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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last night i found a picture of you
and came to a new understanding of you
you laugh in my face, put me in my place,
never get off my case
you try to break me in so many ways
last week you attacked my confidence
talked about things that didn't make sense
it took me all night to stop crying, to realize
you were lying, to know you were trying
to break me in so many ways
last month i might have gone back to you
if i was feeling as desperate as you
but i'm not that weak, don't need you to make
me complete, i've got you beat
you can't break me in anyway
last year we nearly killed each other
we barely made it through the summer
i couldn't make myself love you, couldn't make
either of us stay true, you had nothing else
to do
but break me in so many ways
today we talked on the phone
your voice sounded so alone
why do you say you hate me, with
such sincerity, let your heart be free
you don't need to break me anymore
Copyright ©
priss
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2004-07-31 19:51:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:01:13 PM AEST (User
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Sad but written well.
I can relate as my ex finally gave up on trying to break me.
someone that can't except u as is then u don't need um. We are all individuals here and no one has the right to try-n-break us.
good work.
luv, huggs, smiles, stay strong,
emy |
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:32:23 PM AEST (User
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very sad and emotional write
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:59:21 PM AEST (User
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EXCELLENT WRITE! i can relate to this one so well. youve expressed it to its greatest extent. well done. |
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:17:11 AM AEST (User
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such a touching write, I am sorry for your pain,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:54:46 PM AEST (User
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PRISS - THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULL- IT GAVE ME CHILLS - I LOVE IT |
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:16:17 PM AEST (User
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Evil people will always roam the earth and continue to try and break others. Never let them get you down- I've learned that the hard way.
Peace, love, and bubblegum!!! |
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Re: break me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:58:32 AM AEST (User
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Coming back and reading your old stuff I seem to get the impression that you're walking in sunshine and not so breakable anymore. Experience can some time be the ugliest teacher. This, although sad, is very tender and insightful.
wabl
KenMoore
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