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WHAT IS THIS
Contributed by
storm_amoure
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:17:28 PM in AEST
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when we first met,
you were just a friend.
I never once thought,
i'd have feelings in the end!
We hung out,
a few nights here and there.
But my feelings grew stonger,
and for my heart i fear.
I want to runaway
and hide from it all.
But i'm in too deep
and for you, i did fall.
When you are around me,
i never feel blue.
You make me so happy,,,
I just wish i knew.
Are you in this for love,
or in it for fun?
Will you break my heart,
or will we become one?
Copyright ©
storm_amoure
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2004-07-31 19:17:28]
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Re: WHAT IS THIS
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:29:59 PM AEST
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oh how sweet, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WHAT IS THIS
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:03:10 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. I reminds me of a situation going on in my life. I enjoyed reading this, a good first poem. welcome to YPDC and look foward to reading more A++++ |
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Re: WHAT IS THIS
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:52:08 PM AEST
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Brilliant write....welcome to the best poetry site on the net.....
Jenni |
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Re: WHAT IS THIS
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 03:29:56 AM AEST
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I like it. It's open and honest. More than that it's gentle. Keep up the good work. I too welcome you to YPDC.
J~ |
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Re: WHAT IS THIS
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:22:29 AM AEST
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A refreshing write, I hope to see many more.
regards and welcome |
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