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sorrow found a hiding place
Contributed by
priss
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:10:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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sorrow found a hiding place
disguised itself as bliss,
misfortune held my lonely hand
and laid upon my lips the sweetest kiss.
who knew that pleasure
would lead to pain,
or that foolishness would reside
within my brain?
i never thought my kindness could
be hypnotized by fear
or that i'd give in to its intent
while it whispered softly in my ear.
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priss
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2004-07-31 14:10:32]
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Re: sorrow found a hiding place
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:16:12 PM AEST
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beautiful! warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: sorrow found a hiding place
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:51:50 PM AEST
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| BRILLIANT AS ALWAYS MOMMA- GREAT WRITE |
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Re: sorrow found a hiding place
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:10:19 PM AEST
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Priss-
You, as well as becky have, a phenomenal talent and this is my favorite piece from you. Keep on being the same beautiful person that you are and hurry up and post some new stuff!!!
Peace, love, and bubblegum!! |
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Re: sorrow found a hiding place
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:52:55 AM AEST
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Hiding places can be opened up with fresh air and sunshine so that things that hide can be seen through a wholesome eye ... and be found out. This piece speaks the strength to see "things" that way now. Hmmmm. Am I being over analytical? Beautiful insight poem.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: sorrow found a hiding place
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 01:44:15 PM AEST
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oh priss, my dear friend. I feel your pain AND your
struggle in this. I truly do. How eloquently sad ..
What are our hearts for if not to feel until we bleed, yes?
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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