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Wilting Rose
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:10:04 PM in AEST
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I feel just like a wilting rose,
Bringing to you this sad prose,
As I sit alone with my thoughts,
Inside my head the hurt has been caught.
As I sigh as I write these words,
Listening to the chirping of the birds,
I realise that I am truly alone,
I have to reap what I have sewn.
My petals point down south,
I can’t seem to lift the corners of my mouth,
Across my forehead lies a frown,
My heart no longer wears a crown.
As I hang my head so low,
I feel pain more than you can know,
My pollen has all rotted away,
There goes the last of my sunny days.
My soil is as dry as the desert lands,
Where are my two nurturing hands?
They have left me here to rot,
About my needs they have forgot.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-31 14:10:04]
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:15:37 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry you're feeling so sad. |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:18:02 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful, what insight and such sadness as the rose withers unto nothingness, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by Gentledove on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:57:44 PM AEST
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Here is some life giving water for you to water your parched soul. I offer my hand to you in friendship to help nurture you back to strength.
Gentledove |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:54:20 PM AEST
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im sorry for the sadness u feel...but this is a great write....good job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:12:33 PM AEST
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awwww ((((Pixie))))...
Shari |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:39:53 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write :) *Huggles* |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:48:36 AM AEST
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A wilting rose you say ?.....I'm sorry that you feel this way.
One thing though......the roots of you are firmly embedded in the soil at YPDC.Another great piece of work
steve |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by Lost_Shadow on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 02:32:57 PM AEST
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Your depression really reaches to me through this.
Nice write, and maybe one day you will find the water-bearer to bring you back to life and existence.
/('-, Jiae ,') |
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:40:35 AM AEST
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Oh...such a sad verse. Hope things get better. Beautiful expression of your emotions.
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Re: Wilting Rose
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by PolaroidMemory on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 05:39:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I love poems about roses for some reason.
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