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Cut Of My Nose
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:09:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I’ve cut off my nose to spite my face,
Something I’ve done that I can’t erase,
I let my stubbornness win again,
Now I am sat here feeling the pain.
I am so mad at the way I have acted,
From my stupidity loneliness I have crafted,
Mark is there & I am here,
I’d do anything to have him near.
Again I let hate get right in my way,
& that is why here I must stay,
I should have let go of my anger,
As now it is me who has dropped a clanger.
I miss him so I wish I’d have gone,
Because together is where we belong,
But my judgement was coated in rage,
That’s left me in this desolate cage.
I wish that I wasn’t so stubborn,
That my tongue wasn’t that of a spiky thorn,
As I’d be there right now with Mark,
Instead I have left myself out in the dark.
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by srsuckow on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:56:30 PM AEST
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| I LOVE the first stanza, great work! |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:22:08 PM AEST
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awwwww... extra big hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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well written but soooo sad
(((Hugs)))
Shari |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:43:36 PM AEST
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Well, bandage your face, bite your tongue and pull your head out, girl. Say 'I am sorry' and keep your anger below your shoes where you can step on it and save yourself and eventually your relationship.
Good write, Krissy. |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by Lost_Shadow on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 02:29:30 PM AEST
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Just like the poem listed after this, I hope he really knows what he's got. Or missing.
/('-, Jiae ,-') |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:25:42 AM AEST
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You with a bandage on your nose!!!..
then..you need my big hugs..:-) venkat |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:56:43 AM AEST
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I know what you mean about being stubbon
we all learn by our mistakes
move forward and Mark my words [!]
he'll be waiting for you
after reading your poem |
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Re: Cut Of My Nose
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:25:03 PM AEST
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| great write. some things are out of our control, and we strive to get it back, such as control of anger and hate. use those emotions differently or let it eat you away, but you know this already =] |
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