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your false images
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:59:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Stuck in your inconsideration
lost in your deceit
you wear you masks,
and hide behind stories
you can hurt, you hurt me
believe in me, I believed in you
I hold you high , you let me down
you make my pain
you make me cry
you make me empty
you make me die
hollow heart...
this pain, this hurt, this release
ask me, see me, tell me, be me...
for Im no more, the me I was...
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2004-07-31 13:59:40]
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Re: your false images
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:07:21 PM AEST
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very hauntingly sad. but written with an air of beauty...
pixie xx |
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Re: your false images
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:11:03 PM AEST
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| Ouch. it stings... good poem |
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Re: your false images
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:13:31 PM AEST
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| good write...filled with emotion... |
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Re: your false images
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:24:49 AM AEST
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a beautiful sad write...I enjoyed it yet kept me hallow in the heart...keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: your false images
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:06:31 PM AEST
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| cryptly short. good images. nice job. |
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