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My Love
Contributed by
Rainfall
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:48:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The moon sliver shines brightly,
The violin plays songs of hollow remorse.
For my love has gone
Has gone.
As I drink the juice of hearbreak,
And silver tears slip down my face,
I paddle through the water of sorrow.
As I watch the pink sunset,
I dream that he's next to me again.
The sun sinks below the horizon as I pour my heart out to these empty pages.
The salty breeze intruiges me
And my sanity leaves me,
As I wonder what life will be like.
My ears burn and my legs twitch
To know what is ahead,
Besides sorrow, sadness and nightmares.
Copyright ©
Rainfall
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2004-07-31 13:48:36]
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Re: My Love
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:57:03 PM AEST
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Awww I really loved this one...even tho it is so sad..... you have expressed your feeling so well here..
Jenni...
P/S Check your site inbox for a PM... |
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Re: My Love
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by slayer_015 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:57:33 PM AEST
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Now that is more like it.That was awesome.Beautiful imagery.
Brian |
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Re: My Love
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:06:23 PM AEST
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this is such a sad and beautiful write, an amazing poem, I must say.......
pixie xx |
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