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Rainfall
Contributed by
Rainfall
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rain drops falling from the sky,
Tainted pink by the sunset.
They fall,
Fall,
Hit the ground,
Then more,
Cheerfully fall down.
Clouds full of dew,
Grass
Slippery
And wet
From the
Rainfall.
Copyright ©
Rainfall
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2004-07-31 13:42:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rainfall
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:45:13 PM AEST (User
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personally I love the rain, I find it very soothing. a nice little poem here I like it! welcome to YPDC I look foward to reading more of your work! A+++ (and I like your name!) |
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Re: Rainfall
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:51:09 PM AEST (User
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Warm welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net!!!!
I love the imagery I got from this...
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Re: Rainfall
(User Rating: 1 ) by slayer_015 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:51:10 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this poem.Great job.Keep writing.
Brian |
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