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Paint
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And this is where you left me
To slowly go mad in my mind
And I値l lie here every night and wish
That I could forget you and I
Please, wash me in a watercolour coat of ignorant bliss
So I can forget every memory, every love song, every single wish
I was born to destroy
And you were born to heal
So when you heal my every wound
I destroy everything that makes you feel
Please, take this paintbrush, and paint me a colour to fade
We値l block out every love song, every wish and every memory we made
And so you wanted tomorrow
While I wanted the world in my hand
Every time you tried to help
I destroyed everything that made you understand
Please paint a masterpiece, and erase everything I tried to be
Erase my every love song, my every wish and every loving memory
I paint each day to forget you
I paint each memory away
I値l slash at my canvas of guilt
Until I can finally be okay
I値l paint a pretty picture, somewhere I will hide
So you値l never see each brush stroke, is killing me inside
Copyright ﾂｩ
carmen_queasy
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2004-07-31 12:17:52]
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Re: Paint
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:23:30 PM AEST
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I think this is a wonderful poem. Very different. Beautiful write.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Paint
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by slayer_015 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:53:15 PM AEST
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One word,awesome,I have benn swept away by your river of imagery.Keep writing please,I love this poem.
Brian |
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Re: Paint
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:12:51 PM AEST
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this is excellent. a very interesting composition. it portrays the irrationality you are feeling very well. full of emotion and highly creative. painting is a great way to express yourself and i thoroughly relate.
xxx |
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Re: Paint
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:14:29 PM AEST
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this is excellent. a very interesting composition. it portrays the irrationality you are feeling very well. full of emotion and highly creative. painting is a great way to express yourself and i thoroughly relate.
xxx |
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Re: Paint
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:20:02 PM AEST
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Very good write.....
Jenni |
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