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Dawn Of Life
Contributed by
Dopetherapy
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Created amongst the demons and starring them in the face while feeling there claws grip into me and destroy my insides , watching me die through their eyes. Knowing that in the shadows are the souls lurking and watching this murder. The greatest demon of them all bretahing down her neck and tasting her sweet skin, ripping it from her body. The souls in the shadows grasp their breath while glancing at the demon with the blood of this girl dripping from his eyes and her skin hanging from his mouth. She screams on the inside with her vision blurred from the bloody tears of seeing death. Her lover beinf forced to watch her die. Feeling every ounce of pain from her wounds. She takes death but her lover takes the pain of the death. Her lips lying on the ground saying " i love you" He slips the lips into his pocket and screams out and faces the demon who has killed the love of his life and kills the demon with the love he shared for her.
~Erica Susan Marshall
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Re: Dawn Of Life
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:12:06 PM AEST
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Very interesting, and very in depth. I could imagine it. You are an excellent writer, and have a unique style that is Intriguing. Please do keep posting.
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Re: Dawn Of Life
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by slayer_015 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:04:42 PM AEST
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Imagery,Imagery,and I say IMAGERY!
Good job,vivid mental pictures of a budding nightmare.Keep writing.
Brian |
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