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Stars
Contributed by
loopylou
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:36:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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our stars are in the sky
and they shine the brightest
our stars are in the sky and they're the highest
full of hope and future
and we are so grounded
whilst they are free
but we all have our lucky stars
and mine watching me
like yours is watching you
and occasionally when it's possible
they make our dreams come true
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-07-31 05:36:29]
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Re: Stars
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:52:41 AM AEST
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This is a really well done poem, it's short and sweet. Good work and keep it up.
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Re: Stars
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:52:44 AM AEST
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Awww this is too cute... I love it..
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Re: Stars
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:44:30 AM AEST
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Short and sweet , yet heartfelt
Just how it should be
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Re: Stars
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:18:39 AM AEST
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awwww this is a truly beautiful write,
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Re: Stars
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:25:26 AM AEST
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Good poem. Great advice.
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