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Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:48:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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At the bottom of my tummy.
There's a dark knotted pain.
And this happens every time,
When I start to feel more flames.
Enough is too much,
Because for-ever I will fall.
And then just as I stand again.
Life will AGAIN shatter my walls.
I'm trying to resist,
Making more scars on my skin.
But the truth is that the mist,
Is comming to get me again.
I CAN'T TAKE THIS!
With this bitter feeling inside,
I miss my *,
And still see dark memories when I close my eyes!
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Re: Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls.
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by cauchy3 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:28:43 AM AEST
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| Not too sad . Baby lions are not hurt under slops. Some day A proud woman on back or front stages |
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Re: Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls.
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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a little sad I can relate to this one. great job on writing this poem and thanks for sharing it.
I love these two stanza's
Enough is too much,
Because for-ever I will fall.
And then just as I stand again.
Life will AGAIN shatter my walls.
I CAN'T TAKE THIS!
With this bitter feeling inside,
I miss my *,
And still see dark memories when I close my eyes!
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Re: Living In BROKEN-BRICK Walls.
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:04:57 AM AEST
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This touches my heart some where
pretty deep..
I know this pain
You need to sort yourself out
BS x
upsetting write 4/5
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