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Oceans of Thought
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:09:42 AM in AEST
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Oceans of thought
Waves of immagination
All things brought
By this location
The gentle rythm
The waves lapping on sand
Makes life interesting
It never seems bland
The relaxing effect
The soothing feel
Makes thoughts happy
Helping to heal
Never ending ocean
Never ending blue
Makes you wonder
What would Giligan do
Bluer than the sky
Teeming with life
Animals seem to live
Without much strife
I pick up a rock
Flat as can be
And skip it accross
This vibrant sea
As night falls
The suns reflection does shine
More beatiful than a mighty oak
Or even the greenest pine
Night is here
Bliss is all around
Not a problem here
Not one to be found
The moon does shine
Sparse clouds overhead
The night wouldn't be more alive
Even if it bled
As the night slowy screeps by
Harmony reigns
Only for the day to come
And start the circle again
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-07-31 02:09:42]
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Re: Oceans of Thought
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:19:38 AM AEST
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| Aww very sweet , beautiful and delightful write..keep writing on. venkat |
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Re: Oceans of Thought
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:24:02 AM AEST
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Well I'd say u took the idea and turned it into a marvalous masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Oceans of Thought
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by cauchy3 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 04:22:50 AM AEST
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| Very good poems .But do you run after the moon just left behind the sun |
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Re: Oceans of Thought
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:47:24 AM AEST
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Wow!! Great write!!! Great imagery.....I loved this very much.
Welcome to YPDC....Good to have you aboard...
Jenni |
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Re: Oceans of Thought
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:23:09 AM AEST
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this is beautiful very good write, look forward to reading more,
pixie xx |
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Re: Oceans of Thought
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 06:02:11 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous poem, beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa
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