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LOST WHILE SITTING STILL
Contributed by
KrIsTa2216
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:54:41 AM in AEST
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Before me lies a dark and dreary path
I look but am afraid to see
I know we must all face the wrath
With hopes of someday being free
Sitting here in the dark all alone
With no one to turn to and no where to go
In the distance, I hear a moan,
It is only a cry from deep within my soul
If I could do it again, I’d change it all
Just to go back to that happy place,
Then I wouldn’t have taken this fall,
With my greatest fears staring me in the face.
Always alone
No where to go
Hearing the moan
A cry from my soul
There is no happy place!!!!
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Re: LOST WHILE SITTING STILL
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:12:22 AM AEST
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Hindsight is aalways better than fore sight.
Very sad but written well.
huggs,
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Re: LOST WHILE SITTING STILL
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by kyletycz on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:15:05 AM AEST
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it always sucks to go through life regretting something, but i know how hard it can be to put things behind you when they mean so much to you...
nice write... |
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Re: LOST WHILE SITTING STILL
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:33:17 AM AEST
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Believe me, there is a happy place. It's you who has to gather the strength to go out and find it. Good write. Take care!
Kimberly :) |
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