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Peace Within Me
Contributed by
charmin_ss
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:19:45 PM in AEST
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I have a peace within me that fills a place once bare.
I used to have no hopes or dreams, but now I've
learned to care. It's a place once filled with lonliness,
with longing and despair. This hole inside is full now
with love and happiness to share. I have a peace
within me, deep inside my soul. My hopes and dreams
can live now, they've covered up the hole.
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charmin_ss
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2004-07-30 23:19:45]
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by Thunderwolf on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:19:14 AM AEST
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I'm glad you have found a peace within. Nice write.
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by Gentledove on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:49:41 AM AEST
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A very nice write. Everyone should be at peace.
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:36:37 AM AEST
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Aa heavenly beautifull write that brings peace to the reader.
A peacefull masterpeice!!
peace, joy luv,
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:37:50 AM AEST
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Im glad you shared with us your finding peace. I like to hear when people get out of that stage of hating themselves or lonelyness. Im glad you found your peace. And a very good poem.
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:16:01 PM AEST
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Its great that you found peace within yourself....great write...good job
Lots of Love
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by priss on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:57:22 PM AEST
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| i love this poem... and the moment that feeling comes over you! |
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Re: Peace Within Me
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:01:49 PM AEST
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| THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL- I WISH I KNEW THAT PEACE. |
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