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Blood Red Sunset
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:22:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blood Red Sunset
Blood bonds us all
Because of this we fall
When the blood is shed
The cause is sealed
Till what was wrought
Is brought to a stop
With beliefs we are filled
To avenge the scars we bled
The ending will never come
The blood will always succumb
To bond lives to always die
For the peace that never survives
This is the price we pay
To live just another day
We are bonded by our fate
To live consumed with hate
Against the ones that bled
Our lives away
The sun sets red
Against the sky
To signify
The bloodshed
Of today
The sun sets red
Because of life
It has bled
Because of life
Everything has bled
The blood red sun
Sets on those who bled
Just to live another day
To avenge themselves
Once again
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Re: Blood Red Sunset
(User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:56:01 PM AEST
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| NICE POEM, I LIKE IT ALOT |
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Re: Blood Red Sunset
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:44:29 AM AEST
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very dark and deep write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Blood Red Sunset
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by afterdark on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 12:29:21 PM AEST
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| Your writing here is no diffrence then that of being perfect..I wonder if those who read your work..Really know how much of a Amazing mind and how really perfect your writing is.. |
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