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Hope to Sleep
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I just hope to sleep
Never to be awaken
Because nothing in this world
Can replace what you have taken
So here I am cold and alone
Watching as my blood falls fast
Why does it always come to this?
How long can this pain really last?
It’s just so painful
I wish you would come back
I need you in my life
Your love is what I lack
I need you in my arms again
I need you by my side
Your always in my dreams at night
In them I’m your bride
The dreams i have of you
Are better than my reality
I just want to sleep forever
And it’s killing my mentality
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Re: Hope to Sleep
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:18:29 PM AEST
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ct,
how sad this is. there is more to life than just what any one person can give. always know you hold your own inner power. and there are many other people caring about you.
the voice
great piece!
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Re: Hope to Sleep
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by MyLastBreath on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:18:55 PM AEST
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I can relate :( Hope things look up for you soon.
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Re: Hope to Sleep
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:47:01 AM AEST
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powerful and very sad write, great expression used in your write *hugs you*
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Re: Hope to Sleep
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM AEST
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I can relate to this, to some extent,
made me feel very empty and cold
made me teary
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Re: Hope to Sleep
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:22:05 PM AEST
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oh! such a sad write.
you expressed your-self well though...
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